Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Peer Review for Week 6

Amity Connolly:
9/21/10: Ha! Ha! Ha! This movie sound hilarious. I remember seeing previews, but it just didn’t look like my cup of tea. Well after reading your blog post, I am going to have to rent it.
Your blog post was informative about who the characters are. From your description of the movie, it seems that our society accepts this kind of behavior, especially with Las Vegas’ motto. I like how the paragraphs flow from one to the next.
9/23/10: I like the way this blog flows. As the reader, I am able to understand the where the writing is going. I like that you put your own experience into this piece. It is amazing how much technology plays such a role in our lives. How did the world exist without it??
Jessica Chee:
9/21/10: I hope you are feeling better. I had the flu about two weeks ago and it was not fun. Sadly, the day I called off work so did my assistant. So my classroom was chaotic when I returned.
9/23/10: I think your blog for this day is well written. The paragraphs flow easily and I like that in the first paragraph you had quotes from the reading to make your point. I think you hit the nail on the head in your second paragraph when you stated “…, the family disperses to use different forms of technology.” It is sad to think that this is a true reality of our times, but good for gays and lesbians as they say to not be “in the closet.”

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