Week 8

Week 8: Peer Review Week 7

Amity Connally:

9/28/10- Wonderful work! I like that you have been able to put a life experience to your writing. Your conflict showed the typical scenario of Tannen’s writing. You explored the “she said” point of view well. I can understand why your expectation of marriage failed. (Please remember this is just an observation from your writing, not a judgment of you.)

9/30/10- I like the way you explain the evolutionary psychology as Darwin explained it. The paragraphs flow nicely from one paragraph to the next. You use quotes from the reading to make your point wonderfully.

Jessica Chee:

9/28/10- Great job! I like the way the paragraphs emerge from one to the next. I like the example you give of your husband not listening and relating it to the boyfriend laying on the floor story from the reading.

9/30/10- Nicely done. You make your point throughout your writing. I like how you used quotes from the reading to make those points.