Week 9

Week 9: Peer Review for Week 8

I do want to take a moment and say to you both Thank You!! Your critique of my work has been wonderful. I appreciate your input and thoughts.

Amity:

October 5^th: This blog is well written. The ideas from one paragraph flow to the next easily. I can see your personal self come through, but it does not over power the point you are trying to make. Wonderfully done!

October 7^th: The paragraphs glide nicely from on to the next. You add many details to support your quotes. I could tell this writing assignment was interesting to you. Nice Job!

Jessica:

 October 5^th: The paragraphs flow so nicely. I admire that about your work. You make great points to support your thesis statement. Last paragraph I found a grammar error: “marriage last longer; that then can become an issue of overpopulation.”  Perhaps saying marriage last longer; that they can become an … Over all you did a wonderful job.

October 7^th: The paragraphs flowed nicely from one to the next. Your use of quotes from the reading was well placed. I like the way you put your personal thoughts in the last paragraph. I think this was really well done. Great Job!!